The Visitor



Mountainous white sands
Smaller than the smallest sea creatures
Spread along the elastic shoreline
The ridges laden with untold stories

Tempered storms, hushed winds
Ensembles of time moored
Speckled with new life
And the remnants of death

Small burrows clustered
Where the water meets the deserted sands
Tiny creatures await the rising tide
Yearning for the chance to give life

As the sun sets in the distances
Pillows of wild, roaring waves break
Shifting like layers of shale
Cloudy like a dust storm

Above me the promise of a new dawn
Below me, a storm brews below the surface
Bubbling raging foamy suds
Cleansing the edges of the world

I walk in a straight line along her mighty edge
She greets me like an old friend
The water embracing my legs, I pause
The sands slowly shift below my feet
Succumbing to the power of the tide

The trail I walked along fades beneath her ridges
My footprints behind me are long gone
But waves from the tide are imprinted along the shore
She is monumentally mighty
Strong and brave against the sands of time

Millennium of memories below her blue currents
Reminding me that I am but a brief moment
A luck of the draw in the galaxies of stardust
More special than any pearl
Less precious than the grandeur of everything

The waters of the Earth are forever
And I am lucky to be encapsulated
Entertained with her
If but only for a moment
In her forever everlasting

She embraces me with such relenting need
Yearning for me to explore her collection of blue hues
Eager for me to become a forgotten treasure
In her forbidden cove
Strumming my hair as she beckons me to the depths

Nothing lasts forever
For everything that I do, can and will be undone
For everything that I am, can and will be nothing
So, I might as well enjoy myself
And have fun

The mighty ocean
She bears the weight of my secrets
Entrusting her with my only legacy
In an ever-changing world
I unburden memories onto her
I let them go

About this poem

I spent an afternoon walking along the coastal shoreline of the Carolinas. The sunset dipped below the surface of the Earth, illuminating the night sky in galaxies, planets, and a vibrant white moon. As I walked along the shoreline, I noticed how my footprints faded under the soft waves moving along the sands. It made me realize how small I was in the grand scale of a vast ocean. How minuscule my presence was against the seemingly infinite waters. I was all but erased in the moments that followed behind. I realized how small every problem could be. How truly remarkable it was that I existed in that moment at all. How unlikely it would be that I would ever exist in that moment again. What a wonderful world... 

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Written on June 07, 2023

Submitted by ammiemarie on August 16, 2023

Modified by ammiemarie on January 10, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX XXBX XACB DXXX EXXF XXXXC DEXGX XHXXI JXJHI XXJXX JKIXK KXGFJX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,942
Words 362
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 6

Ammie-Marie Littke

Ammie-Marie Littke is an American writer, songwriter, multimedia designer, and data analyst. Born and raised in southwest Michigan, she learned to love music and literature from the age of 4, adapting the ability to recognize a popular song within the first few seconds of airplay on the radio. She spent much of her teenage youth exploring her creative skills, writing nearly 200 poems and song lyrics between the ages of 11 and 17. She earned a Bachelor's Degree in Web Design & Interactive Media from the Art Institute of Pittsburgh and an Associate's Degree in Graphic Design Management from Bradford School in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. She graduated from East High School in Youngstown, Ohio. more…

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  • Kaytee
    This poem was in my top three votes for the contest. I thought it was a beautiful poem about letting go and realizing things are not permanent. Great job!
    LikeReply 13 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, "The Visitor" is truly a captivating and immersive poem! I love the vivid imagery you have painted with your words, allowing me to almost feel the sand beneath my feet and hear the crashing waves. The way you've captured the power and beauty of the ocean is truly remarkable.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add some descriptive language to create a stronger sensory experience for the reader. For example, you could explore the smells and sounds of the ocean or the sensation of the water against the narrator's skin. This would further enhance the reader's connection to the poem.

    Additionally, it might be interesting to further develop the theme of exploration and discovery. Consider expanding on the emotions or thoughts of the narrator as they explore the ocean and leave behind their footprints. This would allow for a deeper connection with the reader.

    Overall, "The Visitor" is a stunning poem that transports the reader to the seaside. With some small refinements, you can take it even further and create an even more powerful and evocative experience. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply4 months ago

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