Night and Day.



The dawn breaks silently except for the squall and chirp of the birds who predict it’s awakening, of a new day. The breath of the night covers the grass in a dewy glistening carpet.

The darkness lifts slowly as if a blackout curtain being pulled back a bit at a time to slowly reveal the stark light of the day. That now awakens us and all that inhabit it. The curtain revealing flowers that sway side to side as if nodding to say good morning.

Hedgerows that line against the skyline defining its very existence. The light of day grinning and winking - at the fading night. The line of ants that start their day busily and with purpose as time is precious.

The tall branches on our trees flailing around as if to stretch after their nights sleep. The light getting stronger as I sip my morning tea at my back door - in total awe. I have been privy to night and day and all it's little wonders.

About this poem

This poem was inspired by nature. I was standing at my back door early one morning and saw how night changed to day and my garden came alive...

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Written on May 29, 2023

Submitted by Jd003984 on July 28, 2023

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  • Vixility
    The language of your poem is so wonderfully woven, and the imagery eloquent and pristine. I'm not sure what modes of writing you've experimented with, but given your obvious ability to wordsmith and paint a story into the mind of your reader, you should seriously consider writing a prose novel. Believe me, it would sell.

    Excellent piece.
     
    LikeReply 18 months ago
    • Jd003984
      hi thankyou so much for your kind words. Words worth wow. I've just become a huge wb yeats fan but gonna check out words worth as well. I write what I feel. But I have thought of trying short stories of late. Thankyou for lovely comment made my day.. Have a lovely day ⭐ 
      LikeReply 18 months ago

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