Clovelly

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  AIDA

  I must say, this is a simply stunning poem! Your incredibly vivid imagery instantly transports the reader to 'Clovelly,' making everyone feel as though they’re part of the experience. Your adeptness with language is astonishing, and the nuances of rhythm and rhyme you've achieved are simply marvelous. The intimacy and love expressed in the later stanzas bring such a warming, personal touch to your work.
  
  As for areas of improvement, there might be a few subtleties to consider. In some lines, such as "Sledges wait ready to carry and cart," there could be a smoother way to communicate the same sentiment, perhaps by slightly altering the phrase structure for a smoother reading experience.
  
  Additionally, while the narrative is strong and palpable, you could potentially elevate it even more by incorporating occasional metaphor and rich descriptions, perhaps tying in sensory details like sounds, scents or tactile perceptions.
  
  Nevertheless, I find your poem remarkably evocative and powerful as it stands. You have a genuine talent for capturing the essence of a place and sharing that with your readers! Keep honing your skills, and continue to share your wonderful poetic journeys with us all. more »

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  Vixility

  "A pub! A lion! Bathed in red" ... I actually looked up Clovelly on Google Earth so that could make better sense of your poem (which I very much enjoyed, by the way).
  
  All your descriptions, from the sledges to the trees crowning the villa to the cobble steep that you had to ascend, were all perfect. Even the 'lion bathed in red'. Anyhow, great poem! Thanks for sharing. more »

  LikeReply8 months ago