Rising Star

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Rising Star

I am a rising star on an endless horizon
From a long night of suffering alone
Dreams I once kept in secret
Now get their chance to breathe
You said you loved me
Everyday it was just a lie
Neglecting me as your orphan
I escaped with my life in time.

You lured me with your body and charms
And I risked everything I was
Our new forever tattooed on me
Sadly reminds me you are a fraud
Your affections were empty
Frozen as imposing icebergs
I had the misfortune of running
Into your disaster and sank.

I am a rising star on an endless horizon
Surfacing from a dark sea alone
My will to live stronger than you
Ready to breathe and exhale
Loving myself is the lesson
I learned from your absent affection
I’m learning to swim and rise
Without you to hold me down.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Written on August 02, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 02, 2023

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Scheme Abxxcxax xxcxcxxx Abxxaaxx xx
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,036
Words 202
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 2

Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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