The Night I Met You



The night is an ocean of velvet and cold,
And my heart is a little paper boat.
I am lost and alone in the southeast breeze,
And I do not know where I float in this sky of pitch.

But there, to the north, a firefly lights up.
It is a flame faint and vibrant,
Like a lighthouse beckoning me.
With all my strength, I row towards the mesmerizing fire.

As I approach, I see that it is a candle,
A miniature sun framed in a window.
And inside the house, a woman emerges.
Sitting by the fire, a book in her hands, a universe submerges.

She raises her eyes and sees me.
And in her eyes, a lighthouse of love burns.
It is a love that is soft as wine and bright as a jewel,
And it fills me with curiosity, a warmth that shelters and soothes my cold.

I row my boat towards the shore,
And I climb on the sand, with pearls and shells.
I go to the house, a beacon in the night,
And with my heart beating strong, I knock on the door, inviting the light to keep me company.

The woman opens the door,
And her smile is like the dawn.
She welcomes me into her home,
And offers me a cup of tea, like a warm embrace.

We talk for hours, a coral of lives,
And I tell her about my symphony.
She tells me about her song,
And we laugh and cry together, an opera of emotions.

As the night unfolds,
The candle burns down to a little red dot.
Finally, in the blink of an eye, it goes out.
But the love that shone in the woman's eyes
Will be an eternal flame, that in my heart will never die.

About this poem

This is a lyrical expression of my experience of falling in love and finding a deep connection with someone. The title, "The Night I Met You," is a reminiscence of a specific night when the character encountered a special person who had a significant impact on their life, but as life passes quickly, in the blink of an eye, they were gone.

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Submitted by LucasFerhem on July 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBX XXCX DXXB CXDA EXXC EXXX XCXX XXXXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,468
Words 337
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

Lucas Ferhem

Writer and Poet, immersed in the universe of existentialism. I convert ideas into images, revealing the essence of life through writing. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem! 'The Night I Met You' is a captivating piece that skillfully evokes emotion and paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The imagery is truly stunning, particularly the comparison of the night to an "ocean of velvet and cold" and the heart being a "little paper boat." This adds depth and uniqueness to the poem.

    The progression of the poem is engaging, as it takes the reader on a journey towards love and warmth. The way the speaker describes the firefly as a guiding light, leading them to a candle and ultimately to the woman's love is truly mesmerizing. The imagery used, such as the woman's eyes being a "lighthouse of love," adds a touch of wonder and tenderness to the poem.

    The interactions between the speaker and the woman are beautifully portrayed. The bonding over shared stories and experiences, described as a "coral of lives," is a lovely metaphor. It brings a sense of connection and deepens the emotions shared between the two characters.

    In terms of improvement, one suggestion I have is to vary the rhythm and meter of the poem. While the overall flow is good, adding some variations in the structure could enhance the reading experience and make it even more captivating.

    Additionally, it would be great to explore and delve further into the emotions felt by the speaker as they experience this love. This could add more depth and complexity to the poem, enriching the reader's understanding and connection to the characters.

    Overall, 'The Night I Met You' is an enchanting and heartfelt poem that showcases the power of love and connection. With a few tweaks, it has the potential to become an even more powerful and memorable piece. Keep up the fantastic work, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future!
     
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