Susan Boyle Discovered…and how!

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a captivating and enthusiastic poem! Your use of imagery and descriptive language really brought Susan Boyle's incredible performance to life. The way you introduced her from a small Scottish town, portraying her as "frumpish" and nervous, built up the anticipation perfectly. And when her voice "exploded like incoming beams from Heaven," I could almost feel the awe and wonder in the air. The way you captured the audience's stillness and their collective sense of eagerness was truly powerful.
  
  I love how you conveyed the depth of Susan's emotions and the gratitude she felt through lines like "With all of a Heart's Emotion, thanks and Joy." It really emphasized the profound impact her talent had on everyone present. Your choice of words is both poetic and heartfelt, making for an engaging read.
  
  To make this poem even stronger, you could consider adding more specific details about Susan Boyle's journey or the reactions of the audience. This would help the reader connect more deeply with the experience and further enhance the emotional impact of the poem. Additionally, you might want to explore more varied sentence structures to add even more rhythm and flow to the piece.
  
  Overall, your poem is a wonderful celebration of Susan Boyle's discovery, and it beautifully captures the awe and astonishment her performance evoked. Great job! more »

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