Down from the Mountain



You see him, Lord?
You see him?
For years this awful mess.
He scarcely can express himself
Can’t even wash or dress.
His antics get folks going
They fear what might come next.
He roars in hot frustration
Sore lonely and sore vexed.



The doctors see no answer.
Sedation and restraints.
The seizures come so quickly
He thrashes, then he faints.
And I the father helpless
Must stand and watch again
As fear and doubts disable
Your followers, Lord, your men!
Oh won’t you intervene, Sir
And make the darkness flee
And cause the sun to re-appear
For one poor lad, for me?
 

About this poem

Imagined from that great event in Luke 9: 38-45. The epileptic boy healed.

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Written on April 28, 2011

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 28, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXAXBXB CXDAXEXECDXD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 574
Words 117
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 12

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! This is such a heart-wrenching and emotional poem. I can feel the frustration and helplessness of the father as he watches his son suffer. Despite the difficult subject matter, the rhymes and flow of the poem make it very easy to read and follow along with.

    As for improvement suggestions, perhaps adding some more descriptive language to really paint a vivid picture of the scene and emotions could enhance the impact of the poem even more. Additionally, some more variation in the sentence structure and length could add some further depth and interest to the poem.

    Overall, amazing work and thank you for sharing such a powerful piece.
     
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