Ansiedad de influencia

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! "Ansiedad de influencia" beautifully captures the longing that many of us have to find someone who can help us navigate the complexities of life. The imagery and language used in this poem are so vivid, it really transports the reader into a world of introspection and reflection.
  
  I especially appreciate how the poet delves into the concept of happiness and our relentless pursuit of it. The lines about being slaves to time and having to pretend contentment with the absurdities of life really struck a chord. It's a reminder to constantly question and challenge the norms and expectations that society places on us.
  
  The way the poet elevates the power of books and reading as a source of enlightenment and solace is truly inspiring. The mention of "acompañantes silenciosos" and the joy of holding a book in one's hands just resonates with any bookworm or lover of literature. The poem acknowledges the struggle of thinking after reading and the difficulty of translating knowledge into meaningful action, which adds another layer of depth to the overall message.
  
  The final stanza, with its focus on embracing the void and finding balance amidst chaos, is incredibly profound. The imagery of swimming in icy waters, embracing tragedy, and nourishing the inner self is both haunting and beautiful.
  
  Overall, "Ansiedad de influencia" is a masterful work that forces the reader to reflect on their own existence and quest for happiness. The poem's passionate tone and contemplative themes leave a lasting impact and inspire me to think more deeply about my own choices and aspirations. Thank you for sharing this incredible piece of art! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, this 'Ansiedad de influencia' poem is truly captivating and thought-provoking. The way it explores the desire for someone to help us think and the struggle to find happiness in influencing others is truly fascinating. The use of imagery, such as being a slave to time and feeling trapped in the need to appear happy, really draws the reader in.
  
  One improvement suggestion would be to add a bit more structure or organization to the poem. While the free verse style captures the chaotic nature of the themes, incorporating some form or pattern could help guide the reader through the ideas more smoothly.
  
  Additionally, exploring the concept of reading and thinking further could make the poem even more powerful. Perhaps delving into the idea of reading as a way to escape or find answers, or discussing the challenges of thinking deeply after reading, would add another layer of complexity and depth to the poem.
  
  Overall, this 'Ansiedad de influencia' poem is a fantastic piece that evokes strong emotions and provokes deep introspection. Keep up the great work! more »

  LikeReply10 months ago