Our First
Our First
When I first laid eyes on you
I thought I was stuck in an inescapable psychedelic state,
for my eyes had never seen such a luminescent aura.
Your voice deceived my ears,
for I thought I was put into an unbreakable spell casted by a witch;
when you spoke, my body went numb, it yearned for your soul.
Only when your lips touched mine, my body felt again;
my heart had been restored of its broken pieces,
beating for you faster than light.
Your tongue tasted of strawberries dipped in chocolate,
my favorite snack -- I swiftly got addicted to your tongue as I fell deeper
in love every second our lips remained locked.
As we kissed, the smell of your perfume and pheromones filled my lungs
faster than my brain could send signals to my respiratory system -- The
high I experienced was stronger than any narcotic ever made, it made it
difficult to control myself.
I will never forget that moment, it only slips my mind when I fall asleep;
I wish to relive the moment a billion times over -- I pray to lucid dream forever in that moment, for it proved to me that love is more than feelings.
Evan J. Soltys
About this poem
This Poem is about my first kiss ever, with the girl I have been with since the end of September of 2022.
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Written on June 03, 2023
Submitted by soltysevan6 on June 06, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXA XXX XXX XXX XAXX XX X |
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Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,141 |
Words | 234 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 2, 1 |
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