Analysis of Our First
When I first laid eyes on you
I thought I was stuck in an inescapable psychedelic state,
for my eyes had never seen such a luminescent aura.
Your voice deceived my ears,
for I thought I was put into an unbreakable spell casted by a witch;
when you spoke, my body went numb, it yearned for your soul.
Only when your lips touched mine, my body felt again;
my heart had been restored of its broken pieces,
beating for you faster than light.
Your tongue tasted of strawberries dipped in chocolate,
my favorite snack -- I swiftly got addicted to your tongue as I fell deeper
in love every second our lips remained locked.
As we kissed, the smell of your perfume and pheromones filled my lungs
faster than my brain could send signals to my respiratory system -- The
high I experienced was stronger than any narcotic ever made, it made it
difficult to control myself.
I will never forget that moment, it only slips my mind when I fall asleep;
I wish to relive the moment a billion times over -- I pray to lucid dream forever in that moment, for it proved to me that love is more than feelings.
Evan J. Soltys
Scheme | XXA XXX XXX XXX XAXX XX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111111 111110101000101 11111011001010 110111 111111011010011101 1111101111111 1011111110101 111101111010 10111011 11101101010 11001110101011111110 0110010101011 111011101010111 101111110111000100 110100110110010101111 1001011 11100111011011111101 111010100101101111010100110111111111110 10110 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,141 |
Words | 234 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 46 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 124 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
About this poem
This Poem is about my first kiss ever, with the girl I have been with since the end of September of 2022.
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