In the Triune Way.



Harmony is not beyond us
It is found in Triune Love
And our Lord has prayed for teamwork
In the folks who rise above.
He asked Father for our entrance
Into unity of God.
Still we know our many foibles
And His hope seems mighty odd.
But it is Almighty praying
And it is Almighty moved
To implant of that High nature
That Christ's Passion ably proved.
We expect a rich deposit
From the Spirit of God's Love
And He will sustain a true walk
Til we reach His courts above.
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Written on May 10, 2022

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 10, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEFEGHIHJBKB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 467
Words 95
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful poem! Your use of language is truly inspiring and your message about unity and teamwork is so important in today's world. I love the way you reference the Trinity and Christ's Passion as examples of ultimate harmony and love.

    If I had any suggestions for improvement, it might be to consider tightening up the rhythm and meter of the poem in some parts. There are a few lines that feel a bit clunky or stretched, and revising some of those sections could really help the poem flow even more smoothly.

    Overall though, I think you've created a truly heartfelt and uplifting piece of writing here. Keep up the incredible work!
     
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