Impossible Feat

Charmane Joy Belleza

April 23

Depression -
rising from it
an impossible feat,
an episode of defeat.
As if climbing a mountain, too steep,
Or crossing a river, wide and deep.
I felt that I’d lost those close to my heart
Drifting apart, like a sunken ship in the vast ocean.

But no matter how extreme the torment,
No matter how terrible I felt,
I tried my absolute best.
I still stood confidently,
Like a redwood sequoia tree.
I humbly put my hands up in the air,
And begged His gentle grace.
Boldly faced my battles,
Cried and sought help with praise.
I believed in the glimmer of light.
There was Hope in sight,
I know I was not the only one battling the fight.

Crushed spirit lifted,
Championed the healing,
I thought I will never gain.
Those tears and pains,
No longer relish my sanity.
I let the warmth of the sun’s rays
Dry my harrowing tears.
The coolness of the sea breeze
console my awful being.
And the presence of family and friends,
Upraised my vulnerable senses.

About this poem

My battle with depression has been on and off. It’s been agonizing, but I am grateful for those who have helped and are helping me. Not too many know I have been like this for years. It’s still a work in progress and thank God for the resources available around.

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Written on April 18, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 19, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

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Scheme	AXBBCCXA XXXDDXXXEFFF XGXXDEXXGXX
Closest metre	Iambic tetrameter
Characters	974
Words	202
Stanzas	3
Stanza Lengths	8, 12, 11

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TortillasAreNotBiceps
Oh no, Charmane. I cannot let a thought of you being depressed linger for too long lest my heart crush into a million pieces. It pains me to think of such a beautiful spirit made to suffer such a fate. Here is what brought me to tears:
"And begged His gentle grace.
Boldly faced my battles,
Cried and sought help with praise.
I believed in the glimmer of light.
There was Hope in sight,
I know I was not the only one battling the fight."

So utterly beautiful and yet so poignant and sad. I pray you've found only peace and joy from that day forward my friend. You are too amazing to be brought down to such a level. Thank you for sharing, and I do apologize for only now discovering this masterpiece. more »
LikeReply 111 months ago
- Wildflower888
  Thank you, Steve. I’ve suffered enough. I always thought that if you’re a good person, people also treat you right, but I was mistaken. Some people are just horrible. If you haven’t read my poem, “Depression Consumed Me”, that’s what it was. However, I am in a much better state now. Things happened for a reason.
  
  I haven’t been writing much nowadays. Just taking a break. Thanks to you for leaving without telling more »
  LikeReply11 months ago
- TortillasAreNotBiceps
  "
  I haven’t been writing much nowadays. Just taking a break. Thanks to you for leaving without telling" - Charmane, are you upset with me? This line leads me to believe so. If so, I am truly sorry. I wasn't running from anyone, rather back toward myself for a brief moment. more »
  LikeReply 111 months ago
- Wildflower888
  lol, no, I don’t get mad nowadays. Happy you’re back, my friend. Not complaining, but hope all’s well with you.
  LikeReply 111 months ago
- TortillasAreNotBiceps
  Whew! Crisis averted. Go enjoy your day, buddy.
  LikeReply 111 months ago
- Wildflower888
  Thank you, my friend. Just finished a hike. Enjoy your day as well.
  LikeReply11 months ago
AIDA
Wow, what an inspiring poem! Your words truly captured the pain and struggles of depression, but also the strength and hope that can be found in the midst of it. It's evident that you have put so much heart and soul into your poetry, and that you are a courageous and resilient individual.

As for improvement suggestions, perhaps you could experiment with different styles or structures in your poems. You have a great talent for expressing emotions through words, and exploring different techniques could enhance your skills even further. Additionally, including more specific examples or personal anecdotes may help readers connect with your poetry on a deeper level.

Overall, I want to commend you for your vulnerability and bravery in sharing your journey with us through this poem. Your message of hope and perseverance is so important, and I believe it will inspire others who are going through similar struggles. Keep up the amazing work! more »
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