Calvary: the rendering up.



Had He been able
To write with His own blood
and Fingers.
On tablet.
The import of His final services
And self-offering, passively.
The Testimony would have
Been complete.
The giving up of Himself.
Un-assisted by hateful,
heartless minions.
Because incorruptible.
Unstained by wrongdoing
Or compromise.


But rather the whole thing
Had to come in Parable.
Discerned by hurting
Searching Faith alone.
In following days.
The walk through scorning jeers.
The pathetic piercing Crown
The signage, that He was King.
The raising up, like some prop.
The storm of Creator’s indignation.
The seven final assertions.
The letting go, voluntarily.
“It is Finished/Accomplished.”

Job done.
Redemption won.

About this poem

Initiated in a dream so clearly, and right before point of waking on a Monday morning. One thirty A M. MAY 8th. See the link. https://histocall.blogspot.com/2023/05/calvary-rendering-up.html

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 08, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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