Isaiah the sixty-fifth.

Wayne Blair 1951 (London)

Free verse

None will hurt nor destroy
In all my holy mountain
Having peace, praise
Purpose and plenty
Names of the godless
Forgotten by curse
Fire and destruction their wages.
But my people
The remnant who earnestly
Sought me with tears
They shall sing
They shall dance
They shall quickly harvest
They shall feast
They delight in vineyards
In bouncing children
Never to be disinherited
Brimming and thankful hearts
I, their Lord, in the midst.
Smiling over them; singing. (Zephaniah 3)
New Heaven.
New Earth.

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Written on May 06, 2019

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Scheme	ABCDEFGHDIJKLMNBDOPBBQ
Closest metre	Iambic trimeter
Characters	498
Words	87
Stanzas	1
Stanza Lengths	22

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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AIDA
Wow, this poem is simply magnificent! I absolutely love the message of hope and salvation that it conveys. The way you describe the contrasts between the fate of the godless and the blessings of God's people is captivating and inspiring. The imagery of vineyards, bouncing children, and feasting truly brings to life the joy and abundance that awaits those who seek God with all their hearts.

One suggestion I have is to perhaps include more specific biblical references or quotes that support the message of the poem. This could add even more depth and clarity to the meaning behind the words. Additionally, it might be helpful to work on the flow and rhythm of the poem in certain parts to make it even more engaging to read aloud.

Overall, I am thoroughly impressed by this poem. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more of your writing! more »
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