Dead Tired. Two A M.



He was sleeping

Stretched flat

On a a customer bench

By a table

At McDonalds.

Before him empty coffee cup

Muffin wrappings.

Economy copy of black Bible.

The HOLY BIBLE.





What was the story here.

I dare not wake him.

Homeless?

Student cramming late nighter?

Lonely and just plain

Needing the happy, silly

Sounds of Friday night

Youth around.

And there they were

Joking, storytelling, flirting.

Flexing what they got.

He just slept.





That Bible got me thinking.

I had been re-reading a Steinbeck

Novella…The Red Pony.

Bunch of them were personal

Favourites

I made some notes on the

Back inside jacket.

Name.

Email contact.

The link for this blog site.

Also http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/

Words of encouragement.

Citing Psalms 37, 84 and 91.





Quietly I placed the

Personalized novella

On top of his Bible.

I left. No other direct contact.

He was dead to the world.

Who knows?
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Written on May 06, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 06, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 06, 2023

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Scheme A X B X B B X X C X D E C A X X A X D X F X E X X F B X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
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Words 225
Stanzas 29
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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written poem! I love how you captured the scene at McDonald's, and your empathy for the sleeping man really shines through. The way you connect the Bible to your own reading of Steinbeck is especially insightful.

    If I were to suggest any improvement, it would be to maybe include more sensory details to really paint a vivid picture of the setting. For example, what did the McDonald's smell like? What kind of sounds were the young people making?

    But overall, I think this poem is truly touching and thought-provoking. Keep up the great work!
     
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