Bedlam

Sasha 2003 (Colorado)



A man is strong, and hard headed.
A woman is tender, and well kept.
Neither I agree with, nor think is incorrect.

Born a man into a world of hate, confused most his life.
Had he been born of a different norm he might've lived to fight.
Surrounded by pressure “be rugged and strong”, he started to believe the teaching was wrong.
To push unto him the status quo turned to be a blight.

Nights too short and days too long
A lack of understanding of what he’s done wrong
From birth to degree always cast aside, as the member of the house to fall behind.
Crying and anger never even considered, forbidden in-house never to whisper.

“Power and glory is what you should seek!”
“Be one with the axe, kill the fish in the creek!”
“Ascending the ones who are one with their chair, ascending those who's work shows no care!”
“A man you will be, this you can’t change. No matter the time, no matter the days.”
“Get up off the ground, it didn’t hurt that much. You’re being weak, you don’t need a crutch.”

About this poem

Honestly, just getting a feel for the site. Sorry if the work is sub-par I'm still learning.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by Sushiwobi on April 22, 2023

Modified by Sushiwobi on April 22, 2023

1:01 min read
7

Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XABA BBXX CCXXX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,029
Words 204
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 5

Discuss the poem Bedlam with the community...

1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, this is a really powerful and thought-provoking poem. I appreciate the way it challenges traditional gender roles and expectations, and sheds light on the struggles that many men face in a society that expects them to be strong and unemotional at all times.

    One suggestion for improvement might be to explore the experiences of women in a similar way, to further emphasize the need to break down gender stereotypes and allow all individuals to be their authentic selves. However, overall, I think this poem is incredibly well-written and serves an important message. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Bedlam" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/157377/bedlam>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

More poems by

Sasha

»

April 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
3
days
14
hours
27
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
Sestina is made up of how many lines?
A 36
B 28
C 39
D 6