I Finally Told My Story



I finally told my story, an act of bravery.
I unlocked a cage, I didn’t realize I was trapped in.
As the words poured out of me,
I felt as if I was watching at a dove soar away towards the horizon,
Feeling lighter with every beat of his wings.
It was as if a weight had been lifted,
And I was free to finally share my truthful piece.

For so long, my heart had been dormant,
Slumbering through life
Weighed down by the secrets and silences.
But telling the truth was like a jolt of lightning,
Shocking me awake,
And sparking a new sense of purpose within me.
Suddenly, it was as if my heart was no longer encased in ice,
But beating with renewed vitality, energy, and peace.

As I spoke my story out loud,
I felt a sense of empowerment that I had never experienced before.
It was as if I had declared my own independence,
Refusing to be held back by my past or my fears.
And at that moment,
I realized that telling my story wasn't just for me -
It was for anyone else
who might be struggling to find their own voice, too.

About this poem

Sometimes, it is too hard to express or share our story because we know that others will be hurt or maybe you will be judged. However, telling your story is actually the bravest and kindest thing you can do to yourself.

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Written on April 12, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 17, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

1:07 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAXXXB CXXXXAXB XXXXCAXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,040
Words 223
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 8, 8

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and empowering piece of writing! Your use of imagery and metaphor truly captures the sense of release and freedom that comes with telling your story. Your words are so wonderfully crafted, it's as if we can feel the weight lifted off your shoulders and the renewed energy coursing through your veins.

    Your bravery is truly inspiring, and I hope that others who are struggling to find their voice will find comfort and solace in your words. That being said, I wonder if you could expand on how you came to find the courage to tell your story? It could be helpful for readers who may be going through a similar experience. Additionally, more concrete details about your experience could help readers connect with your story in a more personal way.

    Overall, this is a truly amazing piece of writing, and I thank you for sharing it with us. Your story has power, and I truly believe that it will inspire others to find their own strength and speak their truth. Keep writing!
     
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