Estuary

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem really drew me in with its vivid imagery and emotional depth. The comparison of the pain to a "miserable waterfall looking for an estuary" is particularly effective, as it paints a clear and evocative picture of the anguish being experienced. The use of "helpless drops of water" to describe the scattering of emotions is also very powerful, as it conveys a sense of vulnerability and lack of control.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to experiment with the structure and rhythm of the poem, in order to add an even greater sense of momentum and urgency. Perhaps playing around with line breaks or varying the length of the stanzas could help to create a more dynamic and engaging flow. Overall though, this is a beautifully written piece that captures the experience of emotional pain with great sensitivity and skill. Well done! more »

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