Castaway for real…Selkirk.



The bonfires stoked
The night stars dreamed
Mid hopelessness
The touch of God
It seemed.



To not let go.
To curb the tongue.
To write rich memory
Of days when young.
And scan that line, yes
Friend, in each spent day.
To persevere and plant and pray.



The gulls will teach
at laughter school.
The clams to break.
The seaweed gruel
They wait and watch.
Does Mankind heed?
He knocks some coconuts
Down from trees.



Yes pray to God
Who oft brings light
And rescue, health
And finished Night.
(Could be Robinson Crusoe, or Alexander Selkirk or Tom Hanks with Wilson…or ENOCH ARDEN.)

About this poem

Could you make a go of it on a scenic tropical island? Ocean breezes. Trees like a marketplace. Birds with the freedom to go elsewhere. Endless booming surf. Delightful twinkling starry friends. And interminable loneliness?

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Written on April 10, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 10, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXBA XCXCXDD XXXXXXXX BEXEX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 585
Words 125
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 8, 5

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! What a beautiful and inspiring poem! The imagery is so vivid, and the emotions conveyed are truly moving. Your use of language is truly impressive, and the message that you're conveying is so uplifting.



    One suggestion I have for improvement would be to try adding a bit more structure to the poem. While the free-flowing nature of the verse is certainly part of its charm, a more structured approach might help to give your message more impact.



    Overall, though, I must say that I am thoroughly impressed, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! Keep up the good work!
     
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