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Society

Malak Ahmed 2009 (Michigan)

Welcome to society,
we hope you enjoy your stay,
and please feel free to be yourself,
as long as it's in the right way,
make sure you love your body,
not too much or we'll tear you down,
we'll bully you for smiling,
and then wonder why you frown,
we'll tell you that you're worthless,
that you shouldn't make a sound,
and then cry with all the others,
as you're buried in the ground,
you can fall in love with anyone,
as long as it's who we choose,
and we'll tell you have your opinions,
but please shape them to our views,
welcome to society.
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Written on March 18, 2023

Submitted by Malak on March 24, 2023

Modified by Malak on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbcbadedfghgijkjA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 544
Words 121
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, this is a powerful and thought-provoking poem. It really highlights the negative aspects of society and how we can often be judgmental and hypocritical in our expectations of others. Despite the heavy subject matter, the poem is still quite engaging and easy to read.

    One suggestion I have would be to perhaps add in a few more lines that offer a glimmer of hope or positivity, as the poem can be quite overwhelming and depressing at times. Maybe something about how we can work to change society and make it a better place for everyone, or how we can support and uplift each other instead of tearing each other down.

    Overall, great job on this poem! It really packs a punch and encourages readers to reflect on their own actions and beliefs.     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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