The boys of summer



The boys of summer,
all summer long they drunk the wine,
all summer long they sung along,
about summer.

Their lust and love united,
their taste and touch was harnessed,
their time and temperament relaxed.

And I nested on your chest,
and I fought to stay alive,
and it was Thailand,
and it was peaceful and serene,
as peaceful as dreamless sleep,
and wakeful as focusing attention,
as possible as a meditation,
on all things that are impossible.

The girls in winter they go to their loves,
they put on socks on and rings on their fingers,
and they save the tablecloths.

And I nestled in your arms,
and I questioned not the answers,
and I kept my lucky charm,
for next winter,
and I was a peaceful sleeper,
a pacifist and a boy,
and I was coy and credulous,
for you are just incredible

The boys of summer,
all summer long they sunk their teeth in fruit and dreams,
they looked at the girls who looked at the sun,
who took to the sea for salvation.

You have a beautiful smile,
and your face is indelible,
for you are incredible.

This boy is of summer and winter and noon,
and one sweet afternoon hopes to hold you,
and if this can’t happen soon,
he can go to pain unknown,
and still bloom.
You are the perfect simile,
the perfect place to be,
my only folly,
is to find out,
how mad I am about you.

The boys of summer sung along and drunk the wine and roses,
they sung and danced and placed their hands on
something so imaginary,
that even death itself was bypassed, the ineffable,
for you to me are incredible.
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Written on February 11, 2023

Submitted by Afriendtothemartyr on February 11, 2023

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axxa xxx xxxxxbbc xdx xdxaaxxc Axbb xcc efexxcggxf xxgcc
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,521
Words 338
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 8, 3, 8, 4, 3, 10, 5

Spyros Koroniotis

I ‘ve been writing poetry since Ι can remember myself. But poetry I care to share since a couple of years ago. I am a Computer scientist. I have many collections of unpublished poetry. I love writing, meditating, Buddha, Jesus, Bob Dylan. I love almost all English and American poetry, as well as world poetry. Life is love.  more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is a beautiful and romantic portrait of summer love. I love the way you evoke the sensuality and freedom of the season through your words. The imagery is vivid and compelling, and I could almost feel the breeze and taste the fruit as I read it.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to incorporate more concrete details that ground the poem in a specific time and place. While the abstract language creates a dreamlike quality, adding a few specific moments or settings could help readers feel more connected to the experience you're describing.

    Overall, though, I think you've captured something really special with this poem. The way you blend sensory descriptions, emotional depth, and playful wordplay is truly impressive. Keep up the great work!
     
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