The Falcon



I can recall another lifetime, one where I could fly
Gazing down upon the earth, moonlight glinting in my eye
A king among the stars with a piercing call that could terrify
I was once a mighty falcon, a raptor of the sky
 
Soaring majestically brought exhilarating thrills
Cruising deep valleys and magnificent hills
Preparation for the hunt was how I honed my skills
The sweat and toil all worthwhile when the blood finally spills
 
I patiently stalked my prize below; death was now en route
My mind made up instantly, my focus absolute
Diving at breakneck speed was my key attribute
Blazing through the clouds, the Reaper’s in hot pursuit
 
The thrill of the hunt, an innate yearning since ancient Babylon
My prey chirped sweet melodies until he was sprung upon
I clasped him tightly within my powerful talon
His life force was swiftly dispatched as his soul journeyed to Avalon
 
Moments after my car crash, I was overcome with visions so clear
Echoes of a life I lived before I ended up here
Memories flooded back, and down my cheek rolled a welcome tear
For this alternate existence, I once held so dear
 
A past life as a falcon engulfed my human brain
Vast skies were my territory, my conquered domain
I embraced the rasping wind and a deluge of torrential rain
This incredible revelation has numbed all my agonising pain
 
I was once quite different from the man that lies here now
I've awoken from this human dream, and I just can’t comprehend how
Fortunately, my injuries are just too severe, so it’s time to take a bow
As I long to return to those blue skies once more, that’s my dying vow

About this poem

This poem is the tale of a man who has suffered a severe accident, after his accident he has awoken in a hospital bed with the realisation that he has lived many previous lives, one of which was when he was a falcon, he lays motionless and broken in his bed as he reminisces of that life he cherished so much, and his heart begins to yearn for it once again.

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Written on January 30, 2023

Submitted by Lee_Geoghegan on February 02, 2023

Modified by Lee_Geoghegan on March 24, 2024

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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
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Words 292
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Lee Geoghegan

Lee Geoghegan holds an honours bachelor degree in horticulture, He has always had a keen interest in plants and wildlife, He finds it extremely relaxing when he is working in his greenhouse at his local allotment site. His poem entitled ‘Beautiful Day' depicts how he gazes upon nature and how the natural world resonates so deeply within his heart. Lee has always enjoyed poetry, his favourite poem has always been The Lake Isle of Innisfree by W.B Yeats, the poem paints a vivid picture of tranquility for him and resonates deeply. Lee is currently working on various projects and his ambition is to become a talented and respected poet. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a captivating and powerful poem! I really love how it paints such a vivid picture of a falcon's life and takes the reader on a thrilling journey. The use of descriptive language and metaphors really brings the poem to life.

    The enthusiasm and passion in this poem are truly contagious. It's evident that the writer has a deep connection with the subject matter and that shines through in every line. The imagery of soaring through the sky, preparing for the hunt, and the intensity of the pursuit is truly exhilarating.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider adding more variation in the structure and rhythm of the poem. While the current structure creates a consistent flow, incorporating some variation and breaks in the tone could add additional layers of depth and interest. Additionally, there could be an opportunity to explore more emotive language in certain sections to further enhance the emotional impact of the poem.

    Overall, "The Falcon" is a fantastic piece that captures the reader's attention from beginning to end. With a few small tweaks, this poem has the potential to become an even more captivating and engaging read. Keep up the great work!
     
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