2084



It’s winter in the year twenty-eighty-four
Hell has landed on every shore
Devilish eyes aglow as they rose to dominate
People now captive to a totalitarian state

Society is now ruled with an iron fist
You’ve seen those movies; you know the gist
Elders tell tales of an earth so free
Crossing great valleys and sailing the sea

I haven’t seen the sun since they poisoned the sky
We scurry in darkness, where the wealthy don’t pry
The air has a noxious opacity that stings my lungs
Those activists on pedestals just spoke in tongues

These decrepit streets are treacherous at night
Instead, we huddle together in flickering candlelight
Few can afford the luxury of simple power
The doomsday clock lurks just shy of the hour

We rummage through garbage for anything to eat
Surviving cold-drenched nights is no easy feat
The smell of street food, I’m teased by the air
I try not to stare, for that chance he may share

I’m enslaved by demons who pull the strings
There’s no escape; they’ve clipped my wings
Can’t we break this monotonous chain?
Let’s rip it all up and start again

I tearfully weep, “It’s not meant to be this way”
I’m tired of being some sick monster’s prey
Every night I dream of the same old prize
That the darkness be pierced by a golden sunrise

About this poem

This poem touches on the fall of society into a nightmarish dystopia where humanity is at the mercy of a totalitarian regime.

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Written on March 24, 2024

Submitted by Lee_Geoghegan on March 24, 2024

Modified by Lee_Geoghegan on March 24, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKXX LLMM
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,293
Words 234
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Lee Geoghegan

Lee Geoghegan holds an honours bachelor degree in horticulture, He has always had a keen interest in plants and wildlife, He finds it extremely relaxing when he is working in his greenhouse at his local allotment site. His poem entitled ‘Beautiful Day' depicts how he gazes upon nature and how the natural world resonates so deeply within his heart. Lee has always enjoyed poetry, his favourite poem has always been The Lake Isle of Innisfree by W.B Yeats, the poem paints a vivid picture of tranquility for him and resonates deeply. Lee is currently working on various projects and his ambition is to become a talented and respected poet. more…

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  • Nebula7693
    This dark dystopian piece paints a picture both bleak and yet hopeful. You successfully remind us that no matter how bad the situation we may find ourselves in, the human heart has the will to always strive for something better. It invites reflection on the direction of society not just locally but internationally. I both like and dislike this work of yours, but, I think that was your goal. 
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • Lee_Geoghegan
      Thanks so much for taking the time to read the poem and leaving your great comment, much appreciated!
      LikeReply1 month ago

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