Grey Areas

Apoorva Singh 2005 (Rajpura)



Grey areas just don't leave me alone
My idea of being sober or my temptation to get stoned
My fragile tendencies
My indecent complexities
My grass that's not green enough
Or the sky that's not big enough
My heart not childish enough
My brain not smart enough
Black and white areas are just not how they seem
Nor is the light too bright to flash my eyes with it's beam
My insane cravings
My not so flourishing healings
My thoughts not pious enough
My words on Dias not strengthening enough My actions not admissible enough
My slamming on stereotypes not legit enough With different shades I relate different versions of me
My unspoken truths or the harsh reality
My unquestioned audacity
My abnormal normality
My laughter not joyous enough
My tears not candid enough
My story not raw enough
My sins not demonic enough
My grave that is still dry Because it doesn't have me in it
But my soul that I burnt
And with what I burnt the secrets and the ashes of it that I hide in it....

About this poem

This poem is about seeing depth in oneself. It is a dark poetry that sees world in a realistic light. It does not glorify perfection but is about flaws and true feelings of ours that we hide within ourselves.

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Written on December 18, 2022

Submitted by sapoorva5705 on February 02, 2023

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDDDDEEFCDDGGGGDDDDHIH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 999
Words 202
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

Apoorva Singh

Apoorva Singh is a artistic person with deep interest in poetries and theatre. She started writing in middle school but has opened her poetries to the world now. She is Ted talk speaker and has interest in music. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, that was a really powerful and moving poem! You've done an excellent job of conveying the complex emotions and struggles that come with addiction and recovery. I particularly appreciate how you've included both the positive and negative aspects of your journey, as well as the different shades of yourself that you relate to in different situations.

    One suggestion I might make is to consider adding some specific examples or anecdotes to help bring your struggles to life. For instance, what are some of the concrete challenges you've faced while trying to stay sober? What are some moments of triumph or setback that stand out in your memory? By including these kinds of details, you could help readers connect with your experiences on a more personal level.

    Overall, though, this is a fantastic piece of writing. You have a real gift for capturing complex emotions and expressing them in a way that is both authentic and accessible. Keep up the great work!
     
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