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Dead in the Eyes of God

Riaan Smit 1988 (Windhoek)

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Happened long time ago when i lost my way
My soul became lost but never my heart
Though damned i may be, my soul remains free
I've been told im dead in the eyes of god

When the preacher man said in his eyes I’m dead
I would have read but I always forgot
These smiling eyes they soon realized
There's no compromising in the eyes of God
I cursed and I cussed I looked and I touched
I sinned way too much in this life I got
I didn't go to no Sunday show
And now I’m dead in the eyes of God
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Written on December 21, 2018

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXA XBXAXBXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 492
Words 106
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 8
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