Analysis of Dead in the Eyes of God



Happened long time ago when i lost my way
My soul became lost but never my heart
Though damned i may be, my soul remains free
I've been told im dead in the eyes of god

When the preacher man said in his eyes I’m dead
I would have read but I always forgot
These smiling eyes they soon realized
There's no compromising in the eyes of God
I cursed and I cussed I looked and I touched
I sinned way too much in this life I got
I didn't go to no Sunday show
And now I’m dead in the eyes of God


Scheme XXXA XBXAXBXA
Poetic Form
Metre 10110111111 1101111011 1111111011 1111100111 10101101111 111111101 11011110 1110000111 1101111011 1111101111 11011111 011100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 492
Words 106
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 8
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Written on December 21, 2018

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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