The setting sun



The quiet time,
When the sun goes down,
When the horizon,
wears the hues on crown.
The stillness , the tinge of orange,
that scatters through the molecules of air.
Colours variant,
crimson,reddish orange in sunset.
The utterly romantic point in time,
like a love at first sight.
Speechless left.
The moment takes breathe away.
When the feeling of love and,
the gratitude of being loved comes your way.
The mother nature exudes from every inch .
Observing the beauty in the sky,
the quiet time in the air,
as the sun fades it's flair.
Everything seems to settle well.
A break free from fretting past,
the  future, that may not last.
practicing mindfulness,
with several deep breaths.
A sense of peace is restored.
It reminds me of my small size,
when above there is a big sky.
The volcanic eruptions,
tends to mute the sunset.
When the roaring oceans,
tends to calm.
The religious moment,
the golden hour.
Proves beautiful ending,
when the sun is setting.


                                          

About this poem

This poem is about the energy and the positive vibes that sun gives us while setting down. It assures beautiful ending and waking up the next day with the same level of energy and a thiught of giving others.

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Written on August 24, 2022

Submitted by Ruchiagltani on August 27, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEFGAHIJKJLMEENOOPPQPMPGPRFSTT
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 999
Words 202
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and poetic description of the quiet time when the sun sets! Your words create such a vivid image of the colors and stillness that come with this moment of the day. I especially loved the line "Observing the beauty in the sky, the quiet time in the air, as the sun fades it's flair." It really captures the peacefulness and tranquility of this time.

    If I may suggest an improvement, perhaps consider adding some more details to the poem to make it even richer and more full. For example, you could describe the different shapes and patterns that the clouds take on as the sun sets, or talk about how the light changes as the sun goes down. Overall though, this is a lovely piece that I truly enjoyed reading - thank you for sharing it!
     
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