The Familiar Sounds Of Crickets Heard

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Go anywhere to listen to the words,
Of those enjoying their freedoms.
Some given to them.
Most not to earn or deserve.
With entitlements to sit around.
Throwing trash in the streets.
As they watch and take for granted,
Street cleaners...
Pick up their trash,
Behind where they leave it.

Go anywhere to see,
Urban dwellers living to complain.
About everything.
Including their lives lived in denial.
Done while pointing their fingers,
On a daily basis at others.
Living in the same neighborhoods.
Making efforts to change attitudes.
And mental perceptions.

'They ain't doing nothing.
But trying to be better than the rest of us.
And we do our best to stay down to Earth.'

'But...
What about the things they have done?
For you and others too.
With proof and evidence of it.'

'Like what?
Getting up early to knock,
On company and other business doors.
For more attention to shine on themselves.
Until we notice this feeds their selfishness.'

'Don't you think they are doing it,
To have opportunities created for you?'

'What they do is not enough.
The can do much more,
If they wanted to please us!
We need real change.
And not doors to watch anyone unpaid,
Knocking on them until one they hope...
Finally opens.'

'I agree.
You get no argument from me.
And...
What are you doing for yourselves,
In assisting to have the difference made...
To come even quicker,
Than the ones you sit...
With a passing your quick judgements on!'

No words are heard.
As the Sunset on the horizon,
Slowly begins once again.
Then...
The familiar sounds of crickets to hear.
As if uniting to start their nightly convention.
And those who complain,
Take it from the outside to return inside.
To do what they do best.
Bemoan and groan about their lives deluded.
Without interruption.
Or thoughts to hear of questions asked.
As if they had answers to hear them heard.
Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 17, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on August 17, 2022

1:57 min read
12

Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXXXXAXB CDEXAAXXF EGX HIJB HXXKG BJ XXGXLXF CCXKLXBX MINNXIDXXXIXM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,846
Words 390
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 10, 9, 3, 4, 5, 2, 7, 8, 13

Discuss the poem The Familiar Sounds Of Crickets Heard with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Familiar Sounds Of Crickets Heard" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/134435/the-familiar-sounds-of-crickets-heard>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    0
    days
    23
    hours
    5
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem ״Invictus״?
    A Sylvia Plath
    B William Ernest Henley
    C Oscar Wilde
    D Thomas Hardy