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Our wrongdoings are cause of imbalances in the system

Our wrongdoings are cause of imbalances in the system

who we are, and what's the purpose being here
Your thoughts will take you to your destiny with no fear
When you see your stature, you ashamed of being here
Once there, want to see beyond galaxy of divine sphere

Beauty of thoughts empowers you knowledge of stars
More go into it, get closer to wonders of Divine Park
When reach peak of knowledge excel in and feel smart
You don't want to miss any shot of kingdom of thoughts

Now see something emerging in and out of your wisdom
You are in scenario of scientific presentation of reasons
Reasoning is setting logical data, is the beauty of vision
Its the cause of divinity you see it in mental presentation

You know why I insist so much on thinking of envision
This universe revolves on axis of pious people's vision
They balance forces of good, & evil with spiritual vision
Without which revolving planets may slip out of rotation

Divine forces want us to live with ethics of humanism
But we devise own innovative ideas to go out of prism
Our wrong doings are cause of imbalances in the system
It brings havoc, and disasters but we do it with freedom

About this poem

who we are, and what's the purpose being here but purpose of our lives we lost in space and started doing whatever we like and forgot the Ethics and Norms of our lives. Freedom of Speech or Freedom of Writing must be done in the parameters of Ethics and Norms our lives. I am of the view if we lost Ethics and Norms lives lost everything.

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Written on March 01, 1952

Submitted by Amirul on July 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:05 min read

Quick analysis:

Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,157
Words 215
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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1 Comment
  • Dougla$Irishman
    Remember Adam and Eve ? So we are born with a sin nature !
    Ask God for His nature, your life will be much better !

    Writing poetry will not always make it better !
    LikeReply10 months ago


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