Analysis of Our wrongdoings are cause of imbalances in the system
Our wrongdoings are cause of imbalances in the system
who we are, and what's the purpose being here
Your thoughts will take you to your destiny with no fear
When you see your stature, you ashamed of being here
Once there, want to see beyond galaxy of divine sphere
Beauty of thoughts empowers you knowledge of stars
More go into it, get closer to wonders of Divine Park
When reach peak of knowledge excel in and feel smart
You don't want to miss any shot of kingdom of thoughts
Now see something emerging in and out of your wisdom
You are in scenario of scientific presentation of reasons
Reasoning is setting logical data, is the beauty of vision
Its the cause of divinity you see it in mental presentation
You know why I insist so much on thinking of envision
This universe revolves on axis of pious people's vision
They balance forces of good, & evil with spiritual vision
Without which revolving planets may slip out of rotation
Divine forces want us to live with ethics of humanism
But we devise own innovative ideas to go out of prism
Our wrong doings are cause of imbalances in the system
It brings havoc, and disasters but we do it with freedom
| Scheme | A BCBC XXXX AXDD DDDD AAAA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1001011101000010 11101010101 1111111100111 1111101011101 11111011001011 101101011011 110111101101011 111110010011 1111110111011 11100100011110 11001001010010110 100110100101010110 10110100111010010 111101111101010 110011101101010 1101011101100010 011010101111010 011011111101100 11011100010111110 1011011101000010 111000101111110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
| Characters | 1,157 |
| Words | 215 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 21 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 44 |
| Words per line (avg) | 10 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 155 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
who we are, and what's the purpose being here but purpose of our lives we lost in space and started doing whatever we like and forgot the Ethics and Norms of our lives. Freedom of Speech or Freedom of Writing must be done in the parameters of Ethics and Norms our lives. I am of the view if we lost Ethics and Norms lives lost everything.
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Written on March 01, 1952
Submitted by Amirul on July 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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