Whisper goodbye



The news of the final click of time
for she who gifted my first words.

The sudden death of my smile
and the flow of waters of sadness.

Memories that were lost in time
recovered in seconds.

Emptiness covers my chest
with thoughts of never again.

I know it's not a dream...
I can hear my heart scream.

We are never ready, although
we know it shall someday come.

Now I stand holding your garden
favorites as I whisper goodbye.
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Submitted by Crealster on June 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX AX XX BB XX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 429
Words 93
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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