Carmel Valley



Calm Sunday staring across the room.
Eye contact caused such an aroused swoon.
Black joggers exposed all of her curves.
Essential oils provoked such a verve.

Nippled gazing like secret search lights.
Right through her shirt ready to take flight.
Thick beautiful Greek column thighs
I wanted the treasure she held tight inside.

Wet kisses I traced her lips with mine.
Brown eyes I was looking for a sign.
To strip her naked  shirts then the rest.
And taste her nectar I knew it would be the best.

Top lips then bottom moans but wants to shout
Top lips then bottom soft fingers In and out.
Top lips then bottom give yourself to me.
Top lips then bottom cum and you'll be free.

Like smooth jazz In a New York alley
I danced blissfully in her carmel valley.
Then danced away thinking of her hips.
And scent of her valley still on my lips....

About this poem

Poem simply about erotica. Wild thoughts you wish existed.

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Written on June 04, 2022

Submitted by Brooxfullofjazz on June 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX AABB CCDD DDEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 846
Words 176
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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