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Her smile

Her smile

I love to see you smile, to see you laugh
the little sparks in your eyes,
the rosy colour of your cheeks,
your cute nose, scrunching,
I wish I could make you smile and laugh that way

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I want to tell you about my girlfriend, who is not really my girlfriend, because we're in a complicated situation. By this poem I am trying to tell how I feel.

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Submitted by nadidiie on May 18, 2022

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Scheme ABCDE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 182
Words 40
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
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  • Dougla$Irishman
    Dougla$Irishman
    First impressions are lasting, even for a lifetime
    The little things in life you can't replace. Life is skin deep but the face of a beautiful girl is etched in our memory forever !
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • nadidiix
      nadidiix
      Not just her face, everything about her, really, the little things you can't replace, and because you can not replace her, I am afraid to lose her, because everything, every little thing, is perfect about her.

      Thinking, if she was perfect, then why would you lose her? How can I correctly answer this question, Im not so sure. It's complicated.       
      LikeReply1 year ago

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