Analysis of Her smile



I love to see you smile, to see you laugh
the little sparks in your eyes,
the rosy colour of your cheeks,
your cute nose, scrunching,
I wish I could make you smile and laugh that way


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Tanka  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 1111111111 0101011 0101111 1111 11111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 182
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

I want to tell you about my girlfriend, who is not really my girlfriend, because we're in a complicated situation. By this poem I am trying to tell how I feel.

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Submitted by nadidiie on May 18, 2022

Modified on March 26, 2023

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