Underwater
The feeling of nothing
The water is freezing
It’s so loving
Fighting to stay, puffing
Breathing becomes deceiving
The feeling of nothing
The feeling may leave you blushing
Don’t come up yet it’s too pleasing!
It’s so loving
Your adrenaline is rushing
If you come up you’ll be weezing
The feeling of nothing
You’re making it worse by huffing
It’s so fresh and easing
It’s so loving
Oh you’re probably buzzing
Don’t think this water is doing any releasing
The feeling of nothing
It’s so loving
About this poem
This poem is someone who happens to drowning underwater which is my biggest fear.
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Written on May 02, 2022
Submitted by jasminew.60369 on May 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AaA aaA aaA aaA aaA aaAA |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 520 |
Words | 94 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4 |
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