Underwater



The feeling of nothing
The water is freezing
It’s so loving

Fighting to stay, puffing
Breathing becomes deceiving
The feeling of nothing

The feeling may leave you blushing
Don’t come up yet it’s too pleasing!
It’s so loving

Your adrenaline is rushing
If you come up you’ll be weezing
The feeling of nothing

You’re making it worse by huffing
It’s so fresh and easing
It’s so loving

Oh you’re probably buzzing
Don’t think this water is doing any releasing
The feeling of nothing
It’s so loving

About this poem

This poem is someone who happens to drowning underwater which is my biggest fear.

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Written on May 02, 2022

Submitted by jasminew.60369 on May 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AaA aaA aaA aaA aaA aaAA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 94
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4

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