Analysis of Underwater
The feeling of nothing
The water is freezing
It’s so loving
Fighting to stay, puffing
Breathing becomes deceiving
The feeling of nothing
The feeling may leave you blushing
Don’t come up yet it’s too pleasing!
It’s so loving
Your adrenaline is rushing
If you come up you’ll be weezing
The feeling of nothing
You’re making it worse by huffing
It’s so fresh and easing
It’s so loving
Oh you’re probably buzzing
Don’t think this water is doing any releasing
The feeling of nothing
It’s so loving
| Scheme | AaA aaA aaA aaA aaA aaAA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 010110 010110 1110 101110 1001010 010110 01011110 11111110 1110 10100110 1111111 010110 11011110 111010 1110 1110010 1111011010010 010110 1110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 520 |
| Words | 94 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 19 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 66 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
This poem is someone who happens to drowning underwater which is my biggest fear.
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Written on May 02, 2022
Submitted by jasminew.60369 on May 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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