6:58 am drabble



“she isn’t coming back” my friends tell me
but my heart says “she will”
I see her in every crowd, I hear her over all things loud, I dream of her when I know I shouldn’t
I tried to tell myself I’m better off without her but I know I wouldn’t
she already has someone else to take her home and I tried doing the same but I just couldn’t
she isn’t coming back
I wish my everything would accept that
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on April 22, 2022

Modified on March 27, 2023

26 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCCDC
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 422
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7

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