2:33 pm



I saw you post about a new guy
I have no right to feel jealous  
you aren’t even mine
suppose you’ll always be someone I’m obsessed with
frayed cardigan, pearl necklace, cat-like eyes
you always did have a way of leaving me breathless
I don’t mind seeing you post about him as much as I should have
especially when I get to see you smile
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on November 07, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

21 sec read
6

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEBFG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 352
Words 72
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8

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