time an ol' enemy



Days come and nights follow,
rock turns to earth swallowed;
Black strands to hollow white.

We don’t age like fine wines,
All we want is more time.

The fountain of youth we all desire,
The will to live in us burns like a fire.
Fire burns through us,
turns us to dead trees from fresh ones.
Our journey through life is to quench that fire,
To douse it with the waters, of the fountain.

Rain brings life, the sun takes away,
Slowly these days take the rain far away.
But these times bring wisdom,
the meaning of life,
alas, we figure that out at the end of our time.
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Submitted by mkumbkarni on April 20, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XA BBXXBX CCXXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 568
Words 127
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 6, 5

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