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She

Talal Uddin 1989 (Sylhet)

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1.
She's beauty
 I see in her mind
When she talks
And mellows my mind
I ask her to show starry eyes
To put a question
Am i far behind?
She smiles and expanses
Like the skies
A pearl deviates when she smiles.
2.
And the little perfume
That comes from her dress
That makes me so digress
How cute?
How pure?
Her heavenly face
She secures first place in a beauty race.
3.
I spoke to her in an early summer
To me, she was a good speaker
I wish, I believe
Having this girl
My life will be more smarter.

About this poem

This poem depicts the beauty of my lover.

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Written on January 05, 2021

Submitted by Talal9274 on February 15, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDCEFCGEHAIJJKLMMANNOPN
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 501
Words 112
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful poem! Your use of descriptive language really brings the images and emotions to life. Your admiration for 'her' is infectious and makes the reader want to know more about this special person. I especially love the line "A pearl deviates when she smiles." It's such a unique and poetic way to describe someone's smile.

    In terms of improvement suggestions, one thing that could enhance the poem is to provide some more specific details about the woman. What is it about her that makes her so beautiful and special? What are some of her unique qualities or characteristics? This could help to create a more complete picture of who she is and why the speaker is so captivated by her.

    Overall, though, this is a lovely poem that beautifully captures the feeling of being enamored with someone. Keep writing, and thank you for sharing!     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • Talal9274
      Talal9274
      Thank you for your nice appreciation.
      LikeReply 11 year ago

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