Smashing memories and platonic love



You, I think, in my thinking
That is why, I stopped my discussion with Rudyard Kipling
Hitherto, I am waiting & waiting
When will you come & water in my sapling?
When birds chirp, the earth moves
And the sun rises
 People start jostling in trains & buses
 You, I see, in every marrow masses
 I remember those memories previously smashes
To me, you are not a coquette
 And your never-ending beauty may only be compared to mythological Psyche
 Surely, you can be conferred a degree
 And the title of this degree is "mysterious deity"
So, as long as, the earth moves
And I breathe my last
My love for you will never die and exhaust.

About this poem

This poem depicts the depth love for my lover which is platonic or heavenly in form, although the memories I have with my lover has been smashed.

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Written on July 12, 2022

Submitted by Talal9274 on April 08, 2023

Modified by Talal9274 on April 08, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 631
Words 118
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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