Invincible



Unlimited powers, faster than anything you’ve ever seen,
That’s the way I feel when you’re beside me as my queen.
Your endearing love is the source of my energy,
Makes even the harshest days a better place to be.

More than just your presence but your simple existence,
I feel that I can go further, beyond any distance,
See the earth unfold beneath my feet, see the horizon & beyond…
You gave my life direction, stronger than any bound.

Like I am your Superman and you are my Lois Lane

Just a glance at your eyes breaks apart my armour and makes me defenceless,
Your bright smile brings me to my knees, leaving me breathless.
Hearing your voice soothes all the craziness that’s going through my mind,
Only one person makes me feel this way,

 Baby you're one of a kind

Guess having someone makes it feel like you’re flying,
And when they’re not around, you just feel like dying.
Like finding your way when you’re feeling lost or everything’s going wrong,
Kind of like a little child searching for where they belong.

Feels like Romeo & Juliet, like Adam & Eve or many others throughout history…

Just like them or put simply…just….

You & me

About this poem

Happy times a life long time ago

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Written on 2008

Submitted by edilions on January 12, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXX X CXDX D EEFF B X B
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,170
Words 230
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1, 1, 1

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