The Tree or What’s Left Of It



I lived long and time had come to go
Then you came along, I now could live a little more
I tried to stand once again, strong and tall
With you I felt once again, young, alive, at a ball
You crossed my path several times
From dusk to dawn and even nights
Jogging, strolling, you stood under me to catch air
With you, I shared my freshness with tender care
At times when you were lonely, you just sat under me
Reading a book or shedding tears of misery  
I wept and withered with you, my fallen leaves, providing a cushion too
At times you just drove past me, attending to your needs in town
I swayed for you, it was enough for me, to know your safe and around

But now, you are going on to newer paths
Hope they are more joyful and that it lasts
Hope you find your peace and happiness there
Hope it's better than what I could give you here
It is now thus time for me to go too
No reason to stand here without you
Tomorrow they come with axes and saw
Ripping my limbs, my breath shall withdraw
Pain, I always had before I knew thee
But contend with memories of you, is now me
So farewell my friend or whatever you are
If you ever remember this path with scars
There's now a small stump rotting black n blue
It’s dead, but shall stand there waiting for you
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Written on August 08, 2021

Submitted by Maheshw on August 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAAXXBBCCDXX XXBXDDEECCXXDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,247
Words 249
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 13, 14

Mahesh Wadhwani

I always apologize for the length of my text as that’s the best way for me to communicate rather than verbally!! Not a man of many words but still manage to doodle when in mood to write, which is rare!! I am not even sure if what I scribble is poetry or even what form or just words that rhyme!! To me writing is an art, a sign of creativity and a means of expression. I don't really think that anyone can just write without any feelings, without having felt, without having lived, experienced or cherished. Whatever one writes, there is some amount of a persons own feelings and presence or of those around them, indicated in the works. So I am thankful to all the people in my life and those yet to come for having given me life, love, happiness and even pain. At-least I have had the opportunity to feel it , live it and express it, whatever it maybe. Cheers! more…

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