She loves me



Days are happy, days are gay
Beneath the tree, there she lay.
For fulfilling the warm behest
I tried very hard
But never could fulfil.

I came sadly; gave her none
She was never that sad before,
Feeling so much guilty of her sadness,
Never could I tell her of my feelings,
That there was a story behind,
As I knew she would never listen
And regard it as stupid talk.

But suddenly came a hug from the back
Filled in everything I had lacked
Love was never so sweet  before
There standing on the ground
feeling as if in the sky I soar.

I turned back to see
whom the love was from
she stood in front of me
As if a rainbow after a storm.

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote when I had fallen in love for the first time. This poem was written by me on the day when we kissed for the first time. It's a bit of an immature poem but it is what it is.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

Modified by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

38 sec read
4

Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXXX BCXXXBX XXCXC DXDX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 127
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 5, 4

Discuss the poem She loves me with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "She loves me" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 2 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/103142/she-loves-me>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Akash Nayak

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    29
    days
    6
    hours
    32
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    In poetry, the word "foot" refers to _______.
    A a dozen poems
    B one stanza
    C two or more syllables
    D a unit of 12 lines