Analysis of She loves me



Days are happy, days are gay
Beneath the tree, there she lay.
For fulfilling the warm behest
I tried very hard
But never could fulfil.

I came sadly; gave her none
She was never that sad before,
Feeling so much guilty of her sadness,
Never could I tell her of my feelings,
That there was a story behind,
As I knew she would never listen
And regard it as stupid talk.

But suddenly came a hug from the back
Filled in everything I had lacked
Love was never so sweet  before
There standing on the ground
feeling as if in the sky I soar.

I turned back to see
whom the love was from
she stood in front of me
As if a rainbow after a storm.


Scheme AAXXX BCXXXBX XXCXC DXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 0101111 10100101 11101 11011 1110101 11101101 1011101010 1011101110 11101001 111111010 00111101 1100101101 1010111 11101101 110101 101100111 11111 10111 110111 11011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 127
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 5, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote when I had fallen in love for the first time. This poem was written by me on the day when we kissed for the first time. It's a bit of an immature poem but it is what it is.

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Submitted by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

Modified by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

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