She loves me



Days are happy, days are gay
Beneath the tree, there she lay.
For fulfilling the warm behest
I tried very hard
But never could fulfil.

I came sadly; gave her none
She was never that sad before,
Feeling so much guilty of her sadness,
Never could I tell her of my feelings,
That there was a story behind,
As I knew she would never listen
And regard it as stupid talk.

But suddenly came a hug from the back
Filled in everything I had lacked
Love was never so sweet  before
There standing on the ground
feeling as if in the sky I soar.

I turned back to see
whom the love was from
she stood in front of me
As if a rainbow after a storm.

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote when I had fallen in love for the first time. This poem was written by me on the day when we kissed for the first time. It's a bit of an immature poem but it is what it is.

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Submitted by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

Modified by NayakHoonMain on June 20, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXXX BCXXXBX XXCXC DXDX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 127
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 5, 4

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