The White Picket Fence



The call tonight broke the silence
Sister A. called with the news
Sister Linda came to town
Twenty years of separation ending
Father J. was dead.
I heard it in her whiskey drowned voice
Tears of sadness and relief
A cleansing for redemption
Like scraping old paint from wood.

The untended fence kept people out
And shut her in, ivy growing over
Hiding dry leaves and old dirt clinging to cobwebs
Bits of trash under broken twigs
That covered undisturbed burial grounds
Of pocket-sized creatures and insects.

Sister Linda came to town
To mend the fence, to pry open the old gate
And hose down the pathway to both sides.
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Submitted by gbaranoff on June 04, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Scheme xxAxxxxxx xxxxxx Axx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 110
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 6, 3

Gregory Baranoff

 · 1951 · Shanghai

Gregory Baranoff was born in Shanghai, China to Russian parents and came to the United States in the early sixties. more…

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  • yelskwah
    I was particularly struck by the lines about the untended fence keeping people out and shutting Sister Linda in. It perfectly captures the feeling of isolation and the barrier that estrangement creates. The image of her coming to "mend the fence, to pry open the old gate" is a powerful symbol of hope and healing. 
    LikeReply2 months ago
    • gbaranoff
      Thank you for the kind and understanding words. Yes, estrangement is hard on everyone, especially young members of the family.
      LikeReply2 months ago
  • deepapal74935
    His words are simple with a very depth. I like such style and form.
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • teril
    Reconciliation is so sweet, can be such a relief and a savior. You are a wonderful writer, and this is a beautiful poem.
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • kenya_s
    Wow, this was really good.
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • Dougla$Irishman
    Lots of detail here, make for a very lively and interesting poetry !
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • Soulwriter
    Great use of imagery
    LikeReply3 years ago

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