The Silence of Time



The Silence of Time

Fifty years, five decades, half a century ago
We held hands, walked along the sand
Your smile and laughter, the sound of your voice
Filled my heart with such incredible joy
Those memories came back with photographs found unexpectedly
And the heart remembered too the joy and pain
The heartbreak
Fifty years, five decades, half a century ago.

Like now and then, just like yesterday and today
As if no time had passed at all
And yet it has
The best of what we could give we gave to someone else
So what is left to give each other now if nothing more
We gave our own children, and their children, life
Not you and I together
Like now and then, just like yesterday and today

Fifty summers, fifty autumns having passed, fifty winters having changed into spring
The sudden, unexpected emails yesterday too much at once,
The turbulence of words forcing you to throw up your arms crossed to protect yourself
That too much time has passed, that indeed the ocean has washed away all traces of our footsteps
That now we are older than the trees planted from seedlings in ’69 having shed so many leaves
And the skyscrapers that now stand higher than the ones we knew have changed the skyline
Dare we trespass into the silence of time gone by from then to now, from yesterday to today
Fifty summers, fifty autumns having passed, fifty winters having changed into spring

About this poem

It's a journey back through time to a first love from fifty years ago, how we have changed yet not changed at all.

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Written on November 15, 2023

Submitted by gbaranoff on November 16, 2023

Modified by gbaranoff on November 16, 2023

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Scheme x AxxxxxxA BxxxxxxB CxxxxxbC
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,383
Words 254
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8

Gregory Baranoff

Gregory Baranoff was born in Shanghai, China to Russian parents and came to the United States in the early sixties. more…

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  • karlcfolkes
    Your “The Silence of Time” poem resembles the poetic description of a magical circle in which the diameter intersects its never-ending circumference in spaces seemingly different to our senses yet remaining ever the same; Time and Space conjoined in perpetual harmony, with no real beginning and no real ending. Of such are sweet memories that linger; old, yet remaining ever fresh. 
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Vixility
    Fine work! Boy, what journey this life is indeed. The way you wrote this poem, with its cadence and intermittent repetitions, caused me to feel like I was caught in a back and forth temporal haze of time travel and memory. Love the language you use to achieve this …

    Incidentally, I’ve been reading this philosopher (Henri Bergson) whose works orbit around the ontological status of memory and how the past is still organically a ‘part’ of everything that currently is. That coincidence just made you poem that much more interesting and relatable.

    Again, fine work …
     
    LikeReply 25 months ago
    • gbaranoff
      Thank you very much for your praise and thank you for pointing me to the work of Henri Bergson. I found your comment on 'how the past is still organically a part of everything that currently is' very interesting! 
      LikeReply 15 months ago

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