Analysis of Freefall



I feel myself dropping
Falling from the skies
My hands grasping wildly
As the clouds whisp on by

The pitch of night surrounds me
Swallowing up my cries
Evil stars they wink at me
As onward down I fly

My life flashes before me
In slow motion I see you leave
Our love in a thousand pieces
Drifts off in the cold breeze

Shattered now I lay
On the rocks of despair
Red flows my emotions
From the broken heart I bare


Scheme XABC BABC BXXX XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 11110 10101 111010 101111 0111011 100111 1011111 110111 1110011 01101111 101001010 110011 10111 101101 111010 1010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 398
Words 82
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by leol.15970 on May 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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